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Heist page 5 by ShannonRitchie Heist page 5 by ShannonRitchie
Desert Eagles with garnish and thin mints
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jw-18 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great layout.
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ShannonRitchie Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Professional General Artist
Thank you!
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Shango-ThunderStones Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Interesting flow with the woman's head breaking up the flow to become the focus point of the strip. Should have something to tell the viewer which way to start reading at first... Maybe you could have the first panel slightly bigger and then have the woman's head "interrupting" the flow to bring the comic to the dramatic or unexpected twist.
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HippyJonny Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
One thing Can we the page with the letters in please.
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ShannonRitchie Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011  Professional General Artist
Man.. as soon as I see the pages with the words on them I'll post them as soon as I can...
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HippyJonny Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
cool, thanks.
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HippyJonny Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Nice work, no need to be critiqued by someone you don't know bud just keep doing what feels right.
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Caraphae Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Your art just stays great! I really like the waitress' head breaking the panel border. Her relatively unlined face is a good contrast and focal point for the whole page- it's clear you put a lot of thought into your pages as individual complete works, with the panels as components. you're really making me reexamine my own stuff! Thanks!
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ShannonRitchie Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2011  Professional General Artist
Thank you very much... just trying out stuff I've noticed other artists do on this site (which is one of the main things Deviant is for) so anything I can pass on just makes me feel validated that I'm moving on as an artist... thanks for the good words! :)
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Latitudezero Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2011
beautiful strong inks. Love this!
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